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Well heres another song i finally had time to sit down for half an hour nd make music nd i created this. well once again let me know what u think what could be done better or if it just sucks well i'd appreciate it thanks

Again one of my first songs don't really see the purpose i was just messing around trying out one of the generators nd got this wierd happy sound....so i called it wonderland its happy wierd. well just tell me what u think honestly whether it sucks or what it needs to be changed or sumething. its quick i made it in like 5 minutes so i havent worked on it but i thought i'd want to hear some feed back before i worked on it more

Its one of my first songs i only have like a week using fruity loops. i don't have much of a great set up just the computer and the typing keyboard as a piano so im trying. So please just let me know what you guys think and be honest tell me whether it sucks and what i could do better.....im learning.